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RE: Conference Paper Draft

Dr. James Wilson

j.wilson@worldglobaluniversity.com

21 Jan 2025, 14:32

Dear Sarah,

Thank you for sending the revised draft. I have reviewed the methodology section and have a few suggestions that might strengthen the paper.

1. The sample size justification could be more detailed
2. Consider adding a control group for comparison
3. The statistical tests section needs citations

I've attached my annotated version with detailed comments. Let me know if you'd like to discuss this further before the submission deadline.

Best regards,
James